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They Say / I Say Assignment 2
Part A
In
his article "Don't Blame the Eater," David Zinczenko claims that the
availability and convenience of fast-food establishments is fueling today's
obesity epidemic, aided by the unintentional negligence of working parents. Due
to the expanding pattern of both parents leaving the home for the workplace,
Zinczenko explains, children are drawn to the most convenient source of food,
fast-food restaurants. Drawing from his own experiences as a child, Zinczenko
details his lonely home life to justify his adolescent self's preference of
fast-food. Zinczenko's inspirational realization of his lapse in judgement and
subsequent turnabout is clearly meant to provide contrast to those who are not
as enlightened as he, in an attempt to trace their problems back the fast-food
industry itself, blaming the companies for the rise of obesity and its effect
on society,
In
my view, however, it is us, not the food chains, that have encouraged this
plight. While it is true that fast-food is inexpensive and widely available to
the public, the recent obesity awareness
campaigns launched by various health organizations have outlined healthier meal
options for all demographics, and fast-food companies such as McDonald's have
been pressured into providing nutritional labels on the packaging of their
products. Out of necessity, many children have been taught to cook their own
nutritional meals by their working parents and are perfectly capable of
differentiating between healthy and unhealthy meal choices, although their
motivation for such remains questionable. Reheating and preservation technologies
have allowed for the marketing of healthy frozen dinners and the retainment of
leftover food for later consumption. In addition, even fast-food companies are
offering more wholesome meal options to appeal to the health-conscious crowd,
such as salads or vegetable wraps. Some may protest that the added cost of
buying healthier foods makes those options less appealing than the cheaper
fast-food options. Yet I would argue that the extra cost of the more wholesome
options is offset by the saved money that would later go towards medical costs
stemming from the resulting weight problems. Overall, then, I would conclude
that the fault lies in our own inherent laziness and misplaced frugality rather than the marketing ploys of the
fast-food industry.
In
his article "Don't Blame the Eater," David Zinczenko blames fast-food
companies for facilitating the rise of obesity by misleading their customers
about the nutritional values of their products. Using his own less-that-ideal
adolescent experiences with fast-food as a background, Zinczenko proceeds to
renounce the marketing ploys of the fast-food industry, accusing them of
encouraging the spreading obesity epidemic in an attempt to stir up social
dissent. The negative cultural stereotypes surrounding obesity serve as the
reasons behind Zinczenko's argument, likely stemming from lingering resentment
from his social isolation following the onset of adolescent weight problems.
Zinczenko's hope is that such lawsuits will lead the public to condemn the fast
food industry's intentional endorsement of obesity, a horrible blight on
society.
In
my view, however, Zinczenko fails to recognize that while obesity carries many
damaging social stereotypes, it is also a serious medical condition, and the
chemicals and saturated fat contained in many fast-food products have many
other harmful effects on the human body, not just an increase production of
body fat. While it is true that fast-food products contain a high amount of
calories, they also contain large amounts of trans fat, sugars, and
carbohydrates. Consumption of trans fats has been linked to coronary heart
disease, certain mental illnesses, depression, and infertility in women. Excess
consumption of added sugars can lead to cardiovascular disease and metabolic
dysfunction. Such substances also contribute to the development of obesity.
Although Zinczenko is correct in that obesity does, in some cases, lead to
diabetes, he contributes its negative effects as mostly social. Yet I believe
that it is both a harmful cultural stereotype and a legitimate medical
condition. Overall, I would conclude that Zinczenko's childhood obesity and
lack of lasting health problems shaped his bias towards the superficial aspects
of fast-food consumption-an important point to make given that he barely
acknowledges the medical aspect of the condition.
Part C
Well, they definitely are different.
Really long but really good. I agree with your statement of "Overall, then, I would conclude that the fault lies in our own inherent laziness and misplaced frugality rather than the marketing ploys of the fast-food industry" becuae i put something similar to that in my own. So, good job!
ReplyDeleteI should have baked a cake. Sorry, Benedict.
ReplyDeleteNow seriously. Holy cow, Yasmeen! You know you only had to write the summaries, and not a whole essay, right? Well, anyway, they are nice summaries. You don't use them to segue into your main argument as neatly as you could, perhaps, but that's the only thing I could find wrong with them. You bring up very good, concisely-written, and well-placed points throughout them, and you are, for the most part, fair to Zinczenko's original intent and view.
Wife dear, you write a a lot. However I enjoyed this thoroughly as you explained every bit very well. I thought your argument on part one was very convincing and very impacting. In addition, it's pretty fair and interesting on how you worded everything. Also, I'm so sorry that I didn't bake Benedict a cupcake. Anyway, good job!
ReplyDeleteAriella Aung
I thought it was really awesome how you talked about "Misplaced frugality", because in reality they are not saving money but losing out. The author is definitely biased and isn't showing all of the facts in his essays.
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